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Post by Kodi Felton on Jun 11, 2008 21:31:44 GMT 8
Full Name: Kodi Nicole Felton
Nickname/s: Kodster, K, Hey you, Princess
Age: 16
Blood: Pure
Gender: Female
Loyalty: As of now undecided. However she is leaning towards the dark side.
Favorite Subject/s: Potions, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Transfigurations
Wand: (wood, length, core) 15 inch, Ivy, Dragonsblood
Personality: (strengths & weaknesses, two paragraphs min)
Kodi is a very strong willed girl. Like any great Slytherin she is cunning and malacious to get things she wants. Its extremely hard to get into her life but once you do then your set. She takes great pride in the fact that she is a pureblood, and will stop at nothing to keep her family that way. Frowning down on halfbloods or even worse...Muggleborns, Kodi seems to get into alot of trouble.
Most seem to think she goes out looking for it, but she doesnt. It seems that trouble just comes and finds her. Kodi was treated like a princess from the time she was born, her family being extremly wealthy she got everything she had ever asked for. In the end, Kodi ended up a true Slytherin, stopping at nothing to get what she wants.
History: (three paragraphs min)
Kodi was born in Kilkenny Ireland to a wealthy family. Her twin brother Christoper was born two minutes before her, and still wont let her forget it. she grew up in Kilkenny, knowing full well she was a witch and watching her father fly off to work everyday. Her mother was always around the house raising the kids, and her father was the head of the department of Magical Mysterys.
Kodi jetted off to Hogwarts when she turned 11 and got her letter. Her brother on the other hand went to Durmstrang. It was where Kodi wanted to go so badly but according to her mother and father all proper wizarding young ladys go to Hogwarts. Its the Elite.. She knew she would be Slytherin from the day she was born, her mother and father were both Slytherin. Kodi is very cunning and malacious if need be. However if she befriends someone they can expect to be her friend for life.
Kodi and her brother used to spend hours outside their house on their brooms. This made her develop a love for Quidditch as soon as she stepped on a broom. Now sixteen she is doing wonderfully and hopes to make the team as soon as she possibly can.
What can you say about your friends? (3 sentences min)
Kodis friends are definitly true. They have been with her through thick and thin, and thats why she chose them. It took a while for her to get friends that she can trust, but it was worth it in the end.
RP Sample (min of 3 paragraphs):
Kodi sat bolt upright in bed. Beads of sweat had started to form on her face and neck. Brushing her ebony hair from her face her eyes quickly darted around the room. Sighing she pulled the covers back and threw her feet onto the cold wood floor. Moving herself to the window her bare feet emitting small thuds she peered outside. Judging by the dim amount of light it must of been around 5 am. She would be leaving for Hogwarts in a matter of hours and she couldnt be more excited. Staring out for a moment longer she finally turned back in towards her room rubbing the last amount of sleep from her eyes. Kodi grabbed a few more things and threw them into her open trunk that sat at the foot of her bed waiting to leave. There was the distant faint sound of clinking glasses and the smell of bacon wafting from down the stairs. Kodi could guess it was the house elves working on breakfast. From the sounds of it her brother and parents were still asleep. Christopher would be leaving today as well, but not to Hogwarts. He would be on his way back to Durmstrang, something Kodi never understood. Sighing heavily she throws her slippers on and heads out the door, her hunger starting to stab her stomoc. |
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jun 11, 2008 22:37:28 GMT 8
A pretty good application, but there are some things I would like you to change. Firstly, as far as we know, there is no dragonsblood wand core. We do wish to continue to have the same wand cores as known in the Harry Potter universe. If you can show me proof of dragonsblood core, then we shall accept it.
Another thing is that a few of your "paragraphs" are not the length we require. A paragraph, as taught in school, is 3 to 5 sentences. Here, however, a good paragraph, which is what we strive for, is at least 6 sentences in length. If you need help filling out those "paragraphs" with information, feel free to contact an admin about it. We'd be happy to help you, as we would love to have you here.
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Post by Kodi Felton on Jun 12, 2008 4:47:59 GMT 8
((Hope this is better. I wrote the other at Five in the morning. Hehe))
Full Name: Kodi Nicole Felton
Nickname/s: Kodster, K, Hey you, Princess
Age: 16
Blood: Pure
Gender: Female
Loyalty: As of now undecided. However she is leaning towards the dark side.
Favorite Subject/s: Potions, Defense Against the Dark Arts, Transfigurations
Wand: (wood, length, core) 15 inch, Ivy, Dragon heartstring
Personality: (strengths & weaknesses, two paragraphs min)
Kodi is a very strong willed girl. Like any great Slytherin she is cunning and malacious to get things she wants. Its extremely hard to get into her life but once you do then your set. She takes great pride in the fact that she is a pureblood, and will stop at nothing to keep her family that way. Frowning down on halfbloods or even worse...Muggleborns, Kodi seems to get into alot of trouble. Despite what she does, it finds her.
Most seem to think she goes out looking for it, but she doesnt. It seems that trouble just comes and finds her. Kodi was treated like a princess from the time she was born. Her family being extremly wealthy she got everything she had ever asked for. In the end, Kodi ended up a true Slytherin, stopping at nothing to get what she wants. She is however a hopeless romantic, as strange as it may seem. Kodi is wonderfully nice to people she likes.
History: (three paragraphs min)
Kodi was born in Kilkenny Ireland to a wealthy family. Her twin brother Christoper was born two minutes before her, and still wont let her forget it. she grew up in Kilkenny, knowing full well she was a witch and watching her father fly off to work everyday. Her mother was always around the house raising the kids, and her father was the head of the department of Magical Mysterys. She had a normal life, filled with family dinners and magial times. Kodi and her brother spent alot of time together.
Kodi jetted off to Hogwarts when she turned 11 and got her letter. Her brother on the other hand went to Durmstrang. It was where Kodi wanted to go so badly but according to her mother and father all proper wizarding young ladys go to Hogwarts. Its the Elite.. She knew she would be Slytherin from the day she was born, her mother and father were both Slytherin. Kodi is very cunning and malacious if need be. However if she befriends someone they can expect to be her friend for life.
Kodi and her brother used to spend hours outside their house on their brooms. This made her develop a love for Quidditch as soon as she stepped on a broom. Now sixteen she is doing wonderfully and hopes to make the team as soon as she possibly can. Kodi has a strange facination with Snakes, she has them everywhere. It could be because she is in Slytherin but that isnt the only reason. When she was younger she had loved snakes, althought she had an idea she would be in Slytherin. she wasnt completely sure.
What can you say about your friends? (3 sentences min)
Kodis friends are definitly true. They have been with her through thick and thin, and thats why she chose them. It took a while for her to get friends that she can trust, but it was worth it in the end.
RP Sample (min of 3 paragraphs):
Kodi sat bolt upright in bed. Beads of sweat had started to form on her face and neck. Brushing her ebony hair from her face her eyes quickly darted around the room. Sighing she pulled the covers back and threw her feet onto the cold wood floor. Moving herself to the window her bare feet emitting small thuds she peered outside.She had know it was early but she didnt know how early. Pulling back the curtian she peered outside.
Judging by the dim amount of light it must of been around 5 am. She would be leaving for Hogwarts in a matter of hours and she couldnt be more excited. Staring out for a moment longer she finally turned back in towards her room rubbing the last amount of sleep from her eyes. Kodi grabbed a few more things and threw them into her open trunk that sat at the foot of her bed waiting to leave. The trunk was beginning to get full, which was slightly bad. She always aquired most of her stuff after she had stepped foot onto the train. Shrugging she leaned over and pulled the lid shut.
There was the distant faint sound of clinking glasses and the smell of bacon wafting from down the stairs. Kodi could guess it was the house elves working on breakfast. From the sounds of it her brother and parents were still asleep. Christopher would be leaving today as well, but not to Hogwarts. He would be on his way back to Durmstrang, something Kodi never understood. Why couldnt their parents have just let them go to the same school. Now they could only see each other on holidays, which was horrible. Sighing heavily she throws her slippers on and heads out the door, her hunger starting to stab her stomoc.
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Post by Draco Malfoy on Jun 13, 2008 0:14:18 GMT 8
I don't like that you went ahead and said she was Slytherin, but with her personality, it's obvious you wanted her to be in Slytherin. =P So, SLYTHERIN!
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Post by Kodi Felton on Jun 13, 2008 9:34:46 GMT 8
Eeps. I didnt know we wernt supposed to say what house. Sorry. But thank you so so so much! Draco you rock!  |
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